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Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.3
Have you read Terry Practchett? Sure it's not animals but his young adult books are about little blue men with strangely Scottish accents who live in a store and think ...
Apr 26, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.3
Have you read Terry Practchett? Sure it's not animals but his young adult books are about little blue men with strangely Scottish accents who live in a store and think ...
Apr 26, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.3
Yes that's how it would look :) That's quite a young target audience - I'll keep it in mind when I'm reading and see if I think there's anything too ...
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Phyrza Prologue (The Myriad book 1)
I thought they might be! Just thought I'd let you know I didn't like them in case I'd missed some subtle/ redeeming factor. It's interesting to see two villains on ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.3
I like the title though I'd probably say nix the commas and have it without as I agree they don't really work in a title. It has a pretty, lyricalness ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.2
No worries! :)
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.3
1. I feel that his fear isn't justified and an explanation might help the reader understand it? The psychic link seems interesting but if any animal can change the temperature ...
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.2
I think 'your guess is as good as mine' would work best :)
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.1
12. Yes, I'll keep an eye out for this and let you know. On the temperature side, I think even if he comes from the rainforest, he'll feel the change, ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: Unuttered Words.
No problem! And just keep trying out different things. It doesn't need to be just with this poem either - I find with poetry that you learn more by trying ...
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 79
Yes, that may work! :)
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 79
That's cute about the candy hearts! You should definitely try to smoothly slide a little explanation in or something to aid the reader's understanding, though I realise that may be ...
Mar 3, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 42
Yep, I think I definitely differ from the norm when it comes to characters I do or don't like and I have a habit of not liking the main characters ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 42
Yep, I think I definitely differ from the norm when it comes to characters I do or don't like and I have a habit of not liking the main characters ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 43
I think it's more that the vampire outliving family story has been done a lot in supernatural books so it's not that it makes me dislike her personality but it ...
Feb 28, 2017