Rydia

Hello my dear! Transitions Okay so I found it a little sudden how Frankenstein went from being all clinical and socially awkward to being able to hold a warm, gentle ...

Hi there, sorry this has taken a while, but you really should consider posting each chapter seperately as it makes it far easier on prospective reviewers and would result in ...

Hi again! Specifics 1. Some beautiful descriptions of how he felt and feels about hospitals, nice work there. 2. Loving the dialogue. I should really find something constructive to say ...

Hai! Okay so I don't recall if you asked for this review or if I just decided to add it to my review list but either way, here I am! ...

And on to half of chapter four! Specifics 1. Describe the scenery that makes it so obvious that she's in a castle. Are there stone walls, stone stairs. Tapestries? Are ...

Back for part two! This took me longer than I expected but hopefully it won't be as long again before the next part. Specifics 1. “Oh that’s not such a ...

Hi! So I'll get to the second part of Serpent's Teeth later, possibly today, but this is also on my review list and it's next in line. I'm not sure ...

Hi again! Time to take a look at chapter nine... Specifics 1. Why would Victor be the one holding the grudge? It was your main character (I always forget his ...

Hai again! I might get to the last chapter today as well, but I'm not sure. Let's see how it goes, shall we? Specifics 1. Valndra walked back and forth ...

It's perhaps a little too late to help you change it before class! But I shall give you a review anyway because improvement is important and you can always show ...

I know what a Deaus Ex Machina is! I'm terrible at saying/ spelling it though and had to copy your title admittedly xD But yeah, my teacher loves reminding me ...

Rap, neat! We don't see that often here and I'm perhaps not the best person to review - I can't rap to save my life - but I can give ...

Okay so my first thoughts about this was 'Argghhhh! I am scared of all those long lines' because long lines are really scary when they're not broken up into stanzas ...

Okay so I haven't read the previous chapter which means all comments are going to be in context of this one alone. With that said, on to the review! Specifics ...

Hello my darling! Probably too late for the contest, but I thought I'd give you a review anyway