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Re: The New World
As a history lover, this story was interesting. The descriptions were crisp and you provided readers with a nice image of the ocean and the arrival. That said, I do ...
Nov 6, 2015 -
Re: If water were hate
I thought that this poem was very insightful. The images and metaphors were extremely strong without the poem being unclear in any way. You also had a nice "turn" at ...
Nov 6, 2015 -
Re: Ocean
Thank you for your review and advice. It is very much appreciated and I will use it to improve
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: Ocean
Thank you so much for your compliments and advice! I found your comments to be very encouraging and useful.
Aug 1, 2015