RunningWithWolves

I really love the imagery and the details at the beginning in the first verse. My only advice is for the second verse, where you just write "you died". It ...

I really liked the song and the story. However, i think the repetition in the verses and the chorus got a little old. Repetitions is fine for repeating "i'm the ...

Wow, I really like this! I've also read some of you other songs and I think you are a much better writer than most of the pop singers getting all ...

I like this poem and what it's about. Even though i do agree with some of the other comments, i also think that they are sort of missing the point. ...

I really liked this poem. I've felt the same way and also tried to write about it but everything i write sounds sugar coated, cheesy, or they take too long ...