Ruby-Roo

I really liked this. I was really good. I think you really captured their feelings well. And it's well written too. Only thing it, it's very cliched. Two best friends, ...

I liked this. I think most of the things I wanted to point out have already been mentioned. It would be interesting to read more of this. It is very ...

I really liked this, it's poweful and heartfelt. I agree that you should remove the it's before perfection and damaged, then it flows better and fits in better I'll never ...

I thought this was really good. It's well written and humourous. I was abit confused about why she would want to go and live with her drunken mother, but I'm ...