Rubric

Thanks for the review, it was very helpful! It was a great pick on "sufficiently procreative". I think I'll rework it as "fertile" which speaks back into the gardeness's profession. ...

There is no virtue in treating everyone equally badly, and you will never be thanked for it. I would welcome an honest review on your part. Regards, Rubric

I'm not sure you're aware, but I can see your reviews, even the one's you deleted, under the "review" tab on your wall. I can therefore see that of the ...

Turning getting caught cheating on reviews into an uninvited attempt to evangelise has to be one of the most disrespectful, if audacious, things I have ever seen on YWS. Thank ...

Thanks a lot for the review, it was very helpful. The comments about adding dates and more description in that specific mural/garden comment were particularly insightful, I'll take that forward ...

Also, the whole thing about Blodwyn being a sailor/ship captain confused be greatly. Is a lighthouse keeper usually on their own like that? It seems very irresponsible for such a ...

I apologise for taking so long to get to this. University commitments and such. I must say I adore your style, and am loving your characterisation; the constable and narrator ...

Thanks for your feedback, it's both specific and detailed. Arvad's character will develop over time but I may have tried to cut back too much. I was trying to put ...

It may come up later, but the father was essentially a representative of the village, which has to pay a tribute of slaves to the Ulusami nomads. The reasons for ...

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Thanks for the input guys! I *may* have written it at five am after just having walked home and a bit drunk, so it's a bit stream-of-consciousness. That's why there's ...

Thanks SaraAnne and everyone else who reviewed this work! At the moment I'm considering it to be an epilogue for Exiles, though it could find itself being a prologue for ...

Thanks Meevs! I've always been interested in (and appalled by) how the West deals with moderns genocide. I would love to write about it, but don't think I have the ...

You're right about the Vistula, as the uprising went from August until October, the Vistula's state would have been common knowledge. I kind of imagined it being the scout taking ...