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How are the words "actuality" and "reality" differentiated? They are used so interchangeabely that they are seemingly synonymous. I can't really give you more on this without going into a ...

Did I miss something or did you forget about Nagini? I think the only other thing that hasn't been trawled over by the others is the fact that no-one does ...

She scowled at the thought of setting such an impression on her peers Though the second half of the sentence clarifies this, I think the use of the word "setting" ...

Nah I think I'll stand by on flytodreams on this one. As much as you're going to insult a writer, lay off his fans. I won't be the only one ...

My dear, we have a rule here at yws, or rather a ratio. 2:1 This means that for every piece you submit, you must review two other people's pieces. I'll ...

Great Idea for a story! I've always wanted to do one of these! Your seamless interchange between thought and spoken word makes the speaking-out-loud bit especially well done. She grinned ...

My god this is awesome! "I slid across the world’s heartstrings And made a melody that lingered Like snowflakes in the sky. " This is, for me, clearly the best ...

Hey, I've chosen to critique this because a lot of my series revolves around elves, and some of your original ideas have a bit in common with mine. I have ...

This isn't going to be a critique of spelling etc, I'll leave that to someone else. There were a few typo's and you misspelled obsolete I think, but yes, I'll ...

In my heart of hearts I nurse a faint hope... That Eragon is purposefully an arrogant, foolish protagonist That Murtagh is *meant* to be so much cooler than Eragon That ...

"its bad enough " it's bad enough "paid too. " paid to. "what I think of me." what I think of myself: "Sounds neat doesn’t it? " This is the ...

I love this series and am friending you on the principle that you've read it. I really like the new spin it takes on magic (without spoiling it), and the ...

"These three Greek plays were all tragedies" when you talk about Greek Plays, you speak in the present tense becasue they still exist in the same form as they were ...

The Last few imes I've tried to critiwue this, my computer's crashed, but as ever I shall strive on! "I received much joy" this sounds bad, joy isnt something you ...

“I first met the boy eight years ago.” It’s good to see this style of start, where you introduce the topic at hand before giving detail to put it into ...