Royboy

I know this is probably an old post, but I was just surfing the site when I saw it. I like it. “I don’t know anyone by that name, and ...

Yes, but do not underestimate them , they’ll fight back. So I just jump and grab the weakest , right mom? I pounced on the deer, attacking it, taking it ...

Use quotes or italics. It's a bit confusing without them. Make sure you put commas in the right places and the punctuation is correct like here: Look what I found ...

I remember when my brother used to play that game. He would let me watch if I didn't talk. I think this would be interesting. I was about to leave ...

...she wore a bejeweled, gauzy, clinging evening gown under a brown plaid suit jacket. I just feel that 'bejeweled, gauzy, clinging' is a bit much. Maybe you could say a ...

This is really great. It shows the differences in dance styles. It's also been acted out. Ever seen the first scene in Step Up? The guys and the girls were ...

Ahhhhhh! When does Friday come out? I'm dying without it. Meanwhile, I'm amusing myself reading anything by Garth Nix that I haven't read yet. lol. In that case, I think ...

cadmium said: look, life can be like anything. It's true. I see it all the time. A highlighter, a meal, a phone. It really doesn't matter what you're comparing it ...

I found a few typos and I have one suggestion that you don't really have to listen to: After they had chosen a place to sit, a waitress came and ...

It's so straight and to the point. Try and add a bit description, and like Hunter said, double space it so that it's a lot easier to read. It'd also ...

I think the ending was magnificent. Of course, I didn't feel the fear until Zubair's father started pounding on the door. “My family live in Sylhet, you’ll like it there.” ...