RoyalHighness

chronicles of narnia? :D

Snoink that is so adorable, I%u2019m so glad you shared that with me. My day%u2019s been made! :D

I think you%u2019re right about those last three lines; I wasn%u2019t sure how to deal with their separation. But the list format is actually a reference to an inside joke ...

I'm so glad you liked this. I feel like my other poems haven't quite reached your expectations like this one has, so I'm happy. "Screen surrounding will not be pleased" ...

Thanks for stopping by, Lee! I see what you mean about the organization, but I like the way I've structured this. The fewer words are in a line, the more ...

Hey, thanks Gina! My narratives are usually pretty confusing. All it takes is a little peak under the hood. This poem is, for me, about putting yourself out there and ...

Ooooh I like the point about the flow! I hadn't thought of that. Thanks for reviewing my work, I'm glad you liked it! Also, I did notice the disappearance of ...

I have heard the people! I will add paragraph breaks. Thanks for your review!

I always love your interpretations of my poems. Thank you for your review!!

Thank you!! I liked that line too :) Thanks for the review!

Thank you so much! Oh, I had noticed that closeness between the words and I just sort of shrugged it off. I liked the way "rising" sits on the end ...

You have a really interesting interpretation of my poem! I hadn't noticed that the speaker draws a parallel between her father and the ocean. And I had never anticipated a ...

Your second interpretation was correct! I hadn't realized my rhymes were stilted, but you know, I think you're absolutely right. I'll have to come back to this one when I ...

Yknow I was thinking it lacked a punch and I couldn%u2019t understand why! Thanks for letting me know, I%u2019ll definitely make that change. And you got the loss perfectly; that%u2019s ...

oh my god that is such an impressionist thing to say. Alright, well let's see. You want to add some tree imagery but you don't want to lose your subtlety. ...