Roxy11

Aww thank you:)

Yeah this is the first review I've attempted but thanks I'll take everything in to consideration!

This has been my first review so thank you for the help I'll work on that all next tjme and sure would be great to talk!

aww you're very pretty too :3 but thank you so much, yeah im aware about all that i'll be more careful next time ahah :$

Aww thank you, very much appreciated:)

Yeah they were at the end of every stanza :) but I couldn't hack the formatting, would not go into stanzas at all unfortunately, but aahh yeh I see, woopsies, ...

thank you! Pretty new to the site could NOT figure out how to narrow down into stanzas but I get what you are saying. Thank you for the comment I'll ...

I like your play on words, and rhyming structure, it helped create the feel of the poem, the emotion was clearly there when writing this poem, great stuff:)