RoxieRain

Thank you so much for the review and I will take all of the into consideration for other works. But this poem was meant to be to the point; short ...

Thank you so much for another great review! And I know it has bad form but are poems really supposed to have a certain form? I am going to change ...

Thank you so much for the review and I really appreciate the tips. Although this poem wasn't really meant to be 'standard' I guess but more to the point. I ...

I completely agree therefore I will never date him but it is okay to dream right? Lol! And thank you so much for a kind review always nice to read ...

Thank you so much for this review. And this poem was supposed to be to the point. But I do agree I should add more feeling but I just wrote ...

Thank you so much and yeah no one has read that but the people here so I hope it was good. And I knew there was some grammatical errors some ...

Thank you so much. That line also really relates to me too, well I guess why I wrote it haha. But anyways thank you so much for your review :-)

Thank you so much that means a lot to me! And I know it is a bit graphic but still thank you so much although I am sorry it scared ...

Haha I totally laughed out loud because of this poem. I even told my friend and had her read and she was laughing too. Great poem, we loved it! Keep ...

Yeah, I thought that was probably the case and it really worked for that poem. Great job! and you are welcome! :-)

Thank you so much. And this guy really is one of my friends, so unfortunately no Taylor Lautner haha but that is okay. Anyways thank you so much for the ...

I still want to add more to this piece, therefore it is not complete yet. Hope you enjoy it though. :-) -Roxie Rain

Okay and thank you again. I agree it does need some work but thank you for the help. :-)

Thank you so much! I know it needs some work so thank you. I really like this story line so I decided to post this to help with editing and ...

Haha curiously I was to after I wrote it... and thank so much. And I do, I honestly think we all just want to be loved, it is such a ...