RoxieRain

I think that is great to, it is really what you are comfortable with. And I think that would be nice. I rally enjoy listening to peoples stories and trying ...

Thank you so much, you don't know how much it means to me to have you say all that. I actually had a fellow writer go over it with me ...

Thank you for your helpful ideas. I really appreciate advice. Although for my story what may be negative to you is more a positive to me. It is a very ...

I love that you have gone through it too and can understand. And I mean that in the way that we can empathize with each other. Not that it is ...

Unfortunately yes it is. I went through this maybe a year ago. Although, I am okay. It was a hard thing then and the end is still true but other ...

It is now edited if you want to read it. :-)

It is now re-edited if you want to read it. :-)

Thank you so much! And I have thought about length but I am not very good at poems so I like to keep them short and simple. I feel like ...

Thanks and I am working on other poems that I use those ideas in. For me it takes forever for me to even feel like it is good enough to ...

It is okay. I mean it wasn't all bad. For a while he was a really good and supportive friend. But yeah most of it was like that. But always ...

I like this a lot it is simple, sweet and fun. Because come on who does not like Peter Pan! I really like how you continued with the same pattern ...

Just finished it and can't wait for chapter 2! :-)

Aww, you are so welcome because it is definitely well deserved. :-)

Thank you so much. And I completely agree that it should be simple but yet it is so complicated. But thank you again I really appreciate this review. -Roxie Rain

Thank you so much! :-)