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Roxez

  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Distant

    Thank you for your feedback! This is extremely helpful. Also, your accusations were right. My writing style did shift because I rushed it a bit at the end so I ...

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Distant

    Thank you for the feedback, and I am glad I was able to help you out!

    Jan 5, 2014


I always prefer to believe the best of everybody; it saves so much trouble.
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