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Thanks for your harsh words, a true breath of fresh air in a sea of mostly positive reviews. I would really appreciate it, if you showed with my own sentences ...

Thanks :)

Aw, gee, thanks for the kind review.

Thanks for the review :)

Wow Dickensian vibe! A scrumptious comparison no doubt. I'll be relishing on it for it a while.

Thank you so much for your extremely kind words. I am working on the next chapter. I want it to be close to perfect (I doubt it will be though) ...

This is a charming piece I really enjoyed reading it.

I loved your descriptions. You are a very promising writer. The story you've crafted here is so unique, so beautiful and makes me want to read more. Just cut back ...

This is very detailed! You have a really good story here. I am a fan of thrillers with serial killers, and have read quite a few. This one reminds me ...

Impressive! For your first serious work, this piece reads like the hand of a seasoned writer. I really thought I was reading a Stephen King novel. Pace and action are ...

Thanks you for the well thought out review. I will work on the areas you pointed out.

Thank you so much for this thorough and well thought out review. I will definitely try to improve on the areas you mentioned.

thanks you for the well thought out review :)

Thanks a million for the encouraging words :)

Well what can I say that hasn't already been said by the previous reviewer. Safe a few grammar issues here and there, I thought it was a well put together ...