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Re: Swimming, One Day In August
Hi! I was really touched by your story, and I hope you would continue to keep on using interesting vocabulary. I really liked the way you have presented it and ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Restless: Chapter I
Hi! I really liked your poem! I liked how you left it on a cliff hanger type and I also like how you have presented your poem. I lie the ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Barbie Dolls
Hi! I think it is a really well presented and I like the use of short sentences at the end to keep the reader in suspense. I really like how ...
Mar 30, 2016