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Re: Thunder and Ice Chapter 3 ~ Songa
wow this is pretty good :) I love your title!! I have never seen I title like that :o my titles are never that good, like min are so bed ...
Sep 17, 2016 -
Re: the edvencher of Jake, chapter one Jake's dad has gon mad!
WOW! his dad is CRAZY!! But! I cant wait to find out what Minuochy is and what it looks like and even if it really exists, well in the book ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: Conformity
okay wow! and do not worry that is in a really good wow! I really like what you got here it is pretty awesome!! and the END!!!!!! OMG I loved ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: chapter 5
I really like the story but why did Caleb say pink socks? was that really necessary? maybe you could change it to like, "okay well I went down to get ...
Sep 9, 2016