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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Love And Hate (Edit)

    Hi Legacy, Honeymoon here for a quick review. I wanted to say that you did a wonderful job developing the tearing emotion of having two sides and each of them ...

    Jun 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: T17

    Hey there! Honeymoon here for a review! I haven't review in forever so I am still getting into the swing of things okay first of all, I lovee paintings, drawings, ...

    Apr 29, 2017

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other
    Re: Rubble and Ashes

    OK so you reviewed one of my poems and although this already has 2 reviews that pretty much tackled any issue or compliment, I shall review anyway. (ahem, I am ...

    Mar 22, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: (Labelled WEEDS)

    Small review just because you said no one has reviewed this yet and because I am in desperate need of points so lemme take a wack at this and hopefully ...

    Mar 22, 2017

  • Poetry » Technology, Realistic
    Re: Reset

    yayyyyyyyyy a review! Rose here for a review :3 Let us start! (i haven't written a review in so long sooo lets give this a shot) The rhyming doesn't seem ...

    Feb 23, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Unrecognizable

    Hai there! Deeproses here to drop a review for you. warning: I haven't reviewed in forever so forgive me if it is bad aha First off, I will discuss the ...

    Feb 20, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: My Parallel

    Hi Morrigun! Roses here for a little review and a little piece of cake of my opinions hehe. I loveeeee this poem so much. The stanzas were nicely cut off, ...

    Jan 9, 2017

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: A Letter To Myself

    Hi there! Deeproses here for a little review. Imma start off by saying the good things about this poem before getting into the critiquing. The meaning of this poem is ...

    Jan 9, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Forgiveness

    Hi Zelda! Rose here with a small review. This poem is short, and the length doesn't bother me too much, but I feel like you had a lot of opportunities ...

    Jan 9, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Wanderer

    Hi there! DeepRoses here for a review! Just a little precaution: I haven't written a review in a while so I may be a bit rusty, but I will do ...

    Jan 5, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: Monster Under my Bed

    'Ello there Aleta, Rose here for a review! First off, I think the message you were trying to project in this poem was a nice idea, but I feel like ...

    Dec 6, 2016

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: Hiding in a Corner

    Hi ElvenJedi! DeepRoses here with a little review/ a slice of my opinion. first off, wow. wow. This is a beautiful piece. I see no grammatical errors and I think ...

    Dec 6, 2016

  • Poetry » Literature, Politics
    Re: If Ever There was a Moral

    Hi there! Rose here back for another review on another poem of yours :) this poem will be much shorter, trust me, haha. Just wanna say the rhyming was lovely ...

    Nov 29, 2016

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Lover's Remorse

    Hi there! Rose here for a short lil review Just wanna say before critiquing, this was a really good poem to me. It is short, simple, but cute and says ...

    Nov 29, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Twilight

    hi there! deeproses here for a review! I hope these tips help you! oooooooh twilight~ First off I would like to address the imagery was beautiful! I think you did ...

    Nov 29, 2016


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners