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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Love And Hate (Edit)

    Hi Legacy, Honeymoon here for a quick review. I wanted to say that you did a wonderful job developing the tearing emotion of having two sides and each of them ...

    Jun 28, 2017

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: T17

    Hey there! Honeymoon here for a review! I haven't review in forever so I am still getting into the swing of things okay first of all, I lovee paintings, drawings, ...

    Apr 29, 2017

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other
    Re: Rubble and Ashes

    OK so you reviewed one of my poems and although this already has 2 reviews that pretty much tackled any issue or compliment, I shall review anyway. (ahem, I am ...

    Mar 22, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: (Labelled WEEDS)

    Small review just because you said no one has reviewed this yet and because I am in desperate need of points so lemme take a wack at this and hopefully ...

    Mar 22, 2017

  • Poetry » Technology, Realistic
    Re: Reset

    yayyyyyyyyy a review! Rose here for a review :3 Let us start! (i haven't written a review in so long sooo lets give this a shot) The rhyming doesn't seem ...

    Feb 23, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Unrecognizable

    Hai there! Deeproses here to drop a review for you. warning: I haven't reviewed in forever so forgive me if it is bad aha First off, I will discuss the ...

    Feb 20, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: My Parallel

    Hi Morrigun! Roses here for a little review and a little piece of cake of my opinions hehe. I loveeeee this poem so much. The stanzas were nicely cut off, ...

    Jan 9, 2017

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: A Letter To Myself

    Hi there! Deeproses here for a little review. Imma start off by saying the good things about this poem before getting into the critiquing. The meaning of this poem is ...

    Jan 9, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Forgiveness

    Hi Zelda! Rose here with a small review. This poem is short, and the length doesn't bother me too much, but I feel like you had a lot of opportunities ...

    Jan 9, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Wanderer

    Hi there! DeepRoses here for a review! Just a little precaution: I haven't written a review in a while so I may be a bit rusty, but I will do ...

    Jan 5, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: Monster Under my Bed

    'Ello there Aleta, Rose here for a review! First off, I think the message you were trying to project in this poem was a nice idea, but I feel like ...

    Dec 6, 2016

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: Hiding in a Corner

    Hi ElvenJedi! DeepRoses here with a little review/ a slice of my opinion. first off, wow. wow. This is a beautiful piece. I see no grammatical errors and I think ...

    Dec 6, 2016

  • Poetry » Literature, Politics
    Re: If Ever There was a Moral

    Hi there! Rose here back for another review on another poem of yours :) this poem will be much shorter, trust me, haha. Just wanna say the rhyming was lovely ...

    Nov 29, 2016

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: Lover's Remorse

    Hi there! Rose here for a short lil review Just wanna say before critiquing, this was a really good poem to me. It is short, simple, but cute and says ...

    Nov 29, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Twilight

    hi there! deeproses here for a review! I hope these tips help you! oooooooh twilight~ First off I would like to address the imagery was beautiful! I think you did ...

    Nov 29, 2016

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