Rosebug

Thank you so much!! You really made my day :D

Thank you for the quick fixes; nitpicky things are the easiest to fix. With the unfinished sentence, I kept having to reread this sentence because something felt off! Now I ...

Thank you so much, I strive for imagery! You are right though, the personification of rain really would have been a nice touch...I should have thought of that! I will ...

Thank you so much for your review, it really has helped me! I had shown a peer this story for them to edit, and they just didn't help at all. ...

Thank you so much for your comment! I'll make sure to go through it again to look for those things, thanks for pointing that out. I'm sure my English Teacher ...