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Re: Time of Our Lies (Chapter One)
Yay, time to nom on nitpicks! Nyaha. Rosea here, as requested~ Sorry I took kinda long... and wow, that's a really long piece. (o_o) Let's go. Time of Our Lies ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: The Arkford Sleepidemic!
Hiya there, Mr. Carbon. Rosea here, for the trade~ The opening made me frown immediately. Why? Because of the word "industrial". "Industrial" or any such technical term, to me, is ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Hold the line, another call is coming
Hiya, Mr. Mustard. Rosea here, as requested, and at your service~ First off... Hold the line, another call is coming The title is intriguing. Try to capitalize the first letters, ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Dear Inspiration
Hiya, Tink! Rosea here, as requested, at your service. *bows* :3 So... Dear Inspiration, I am writing to request the whereabouts of your presence, following your recent dissapearance I have ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Underhome- beginning
Hiya, munchkin. Rosea here, at your service. First off... "Here, you can be the cat this time." Beryl glanced at his brother, who was studying something as usual."C'mon, Case, what ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Start of the Soulkana Prologue
Hiya~ Rosea here, postponing my hunt for breakfast as I take time to review your work. Let's start~ Prologue Long ago, deep in the peaceful forests of the Realms of ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Frustration
I found it, whee~ Hi again. Rosea here, as requested~ Frustrated, I glared at him. He looked so smug that I wanted to slap him. I noticed that you tend ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
Oh, mamma. I usually don't comment on romance, but here I am~ Rosea at your service, downing a pint of cherry syrup before I face the epic world of romantic ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: A Grocer's Nightmare
Hiya! Rosea here, popping some popcorn on the stove while I -- oh my GOSH that is a long entry. *shocked gasp* Well, anyway, I'm already here, and I decide ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Flash Fiction: Dark Rain
Hi. Rosea here, watching pink and purple hippos battle it out in a raging rainbow fight as I review your work. First things first, then~ Walking forward, one foot slowly ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Darkness of The Heart
Hello, Mila. Rosea here, munching on some pop tarts while reviewing your work. :3 First off... I can hear the bluebirds calling. As I listen, I can hear their song ...
Apr 1, 2011
