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RoseBalor

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: asphalt

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    Hi! This was a very interesting poem! I really enjoyed the metaphors you used and the comparisons that were made. I’m not big on poetry but I thought this was ...

    Nov 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: asphalt

    Hi! This was a very interesting poem! I really enjoyed the metaphors you used and the comparisons that were made. I’m not big on poetry but I thought this was ...

    Nov 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Dear Human: NOT a Turtle

    I love this! Using humor to describe something I know many human mistake, me included. A great way to tell an audience the difference between the two. I love how ...

    Nov 11, 2023
  • Poetry » Culture, Humor Re: Autumn's Alliteration Jubilee

    I kind of wanted it to keep going haha. Saying the words aloud was almost like a tongue twister. Great vocabulary. Captivating. Also kind of made me hungry a bit! ...

    Nov 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Four

    The suspense build up is great. I also really like the cliffhanger so you can captivate the reader and keep them coming back for more! I enjoyed reading the description ...

    Nov 11, 2023


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