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RoseBalor

  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: resisting womanhood

    I found this poem to be absolutely interesting. It’s short and isn’t the type of poem I’d usually read. I like how it makes the reader think. You’re telling a ...

    Nov 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: asphalt

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    Hi! This was a very interesting poem! I really enjoyed the metaphors you used and the comparisons that were made. I’m not big on poetry but I thought this was ...

    Nov 12, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Constellation of Tears

    Wow. This was very well written. I felt very different emotions from beginning to end. I absolutely enjoyed the middle part when you said, “You carve me like a pumpkin, ...

    Nov 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Cruel Fate

    Poetry is not my thing but I do enjoy it from time to time. Yours caught my eye and I’m glad it did. Not too long but yet not short. ...

    Nov 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Health, Spiritual Re: The First and Last Time I Had an Anxiety Attack

    I would first like to say that I’m so grateful to have found this today. I’m what you said, a silent sufferer. It’s kind of hard to express to others ...

    Nov 11, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: In the Lions Cage

    Poetry was never my strong suit but I do enjoy reading them from time to time. I was very captivated by your words. I had this picture in my head ...

    Nov 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: One Year, Fourteen Days: Chapter Four

    The suspense build up is great. I also really like the cliffhanger so you can captivate the reader and keep them coming back for more! I enjoyed reading the description ...

    Nov 11, 2023


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)