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Rosan

  • Poetry » Horror, Other Re: Cirque de Sin (1st mistake: Entering)

    It was a really good piece. I liked how you constructed each line. Though there are some corrections to be made, I still think it was great and I hope ...

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: A Game till the End

    Thanks for reading! I'll be improving it so if there's anything you think I should do, please feel free to message me.

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: A Game till the End

    Thanks a lot. Is there anything else I have to do?

    Mar 23, 2013


The thing about plummeting downhill at fifty miles an hour on a snack platter - if you realize it's a bad idea when you're halfway down, it's too late.
— Rick Riordan, The Son of Neptune