Rosamunroe

wonderfull !!!

.... more soon ? lol this story is why i come online these days.

fantastic c;

how often do you update? haha im so engrossed in this !!!!

Fantastic ! I want more lol. At first I thought the main was going to be boy, sorry!

Thank you max ... the fact there was no line breaks was not intentional but i think ill try a few more poems like this Thank you for the feedback ...

There is supposed to be line breaks at the capital letters. I was writing this from my phone and it wouldnt let me seperate the line The fingers retreat part ...

Hello here is your review "Be. With all my love, Dad." Be is a ssubordinate clause and should be linked with a main clause. I suggest changing the period to ...

Hello here is your review "Be. With all my love, Dad." Be is a ssubordinate clause and should be linked with a main clause. I suggest changing the period to ...

Absolutely wonderfull suga !!!