RoryLegend

I did some editing. Actually a lot of editing. If you get a chance to re-read let me know! I'll (hopefully) be posting the next chapter soon and I have ...

Dang it! I knew I didn't change all of the Veronica's to Sophies! And I'm sorry I'm so terrible at grammar, especially dialogue grammar. I promise I'm trying, but I ...

I used a screenwriting program and it does all the formating for me, I've used it for a couple years, but when I went to post it on here all ...

Thanks guys! I'm designing it for tv actually, If it gets good enough I want to use it in my application for a TV writing program thing. This is just ...

Thank you for the comments I really appreciate them! My final is due on Tuesday but I'm getting it all together today so that It definately is ready for Tuesday! ...

Alright guys. Thanks for the reviews. It's helpful because I am using this for my final portfolio. Sorry that it is depressing Lilchoma! My teacher likes depressing stuff, we are ...

Hahaha You make me laugh.

Oh wow, thanks. I really appreciate. I actually have the next parts so I will post them. I will also be updating this part using the grammar changes Hannah gave ...

Wow, I knew I sucked at grammar but I didn't know I sucked that bad. Haha. This is just my first draft but I will definatly fix all of that ...

alright thanks. By the way if I sounded like rude or unappreciative of your review when I listed those five points I'm sorry. I wasn't trying to be defensive or ...

Thank you both for your comments. The whole comma thing, I wanted it to sound broken. Each part was a different idea. 1.concept-little sloppy 2.rhythm-needs much improvement 3.idea- talking about ...

haha haha nicely done.

My bad, I was about half alseep when I typed this last night, but the thing is it was on my mind to actually post it because I had been ...

Hey dude, I want to read your script..but if you wouldn't mind could you just put it in the post so people don't have to dowload things and such. It ...

Also, put a title on at the top of your script. I know that you put it in the topic subject but if you sent a manuscript of your script ...