RoryLegend

Nice job, very well done. I like the imagery, I can really see this place in my head. The only part that threw me was the rhyming between briar and ...

That was quite enjoyable to read. I could really picture the whole thing mentally, which is something I LOVE to be able to do. In my opinion the train isn't ...

I quite enjoyed it. It's one of those poems I could see in a book like "Where the Sidewalk Ends" or "A Light in the Attic" which I remember reading ...

I liked it, it was easy to read. And again like with your poem, Hide me.. I could really create mental images. I love the eigth stanza where you say.. ...

B: He's an idiot! C: With a gun. He's the last person I'd mess with. B: You're the sheriff. C: Without a gun! What do you think I am, stupid? ...

I liked this..it's a great idea. But I felt that there should have been something before this, and definatly more after it. It was just I felt like I was ...

I really want to know what going to happen next! Ah! I like this story a lot and can really relate to the main character. I even know a bit ...