Rook

Thanks!

Thank you Audy, I'll definitely think about that!

Thank you!

Thanks for your review!

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Thanks Malachi! I do write prose sometimes, I just end up finishing my poems more than I finish any prose.

Thank you!

Hi! Thank you for your review, but I will not be extending the length. Like you said, it's meant to make you think, and this is a haiku, so no ...

Welcome to YWS and thank you for your review! :D A short poem like this with three lines (the first one 5 syllables, the second one 7 syllables, and the ...

If you go back and delete all of your "paragraphs" (where you pressed the enter/return key) except right after the line that's supposed to be further apart, and then press ...

Thanks for your review and... no. I'm sorry to say that "mummer" WAS supposed to be murmer. I didn't really know what rills meant though so... ;) This review made ...

Thank you for this review! I'll definitely look over the punctuation again. My main focus was on it being grammatically correct, since there isn't much rhythm, but I have to ...

"Big Blue" is the sea. These were my musings as I played in the ocean.

If you go back in edit it, you can change that by doing Shift enter instead of just enter. :)

Thank you for this review! I actually meant "static" as in static on a tv or radio.