RockSaltAnddNails

beautiful. this reads almost like a song. it's a great meter and very lyrical. i love the setting. the Civil War was just so sad in general. add an underage ...

wow. so hauntingly beautiful. i also love love love the subject. there is all this sorrow and sadness and outrage when someone is killed (and then even more outrage for ...

this was very interesting. i love how you equate truth with acid. i could feel it myself, the burning. i also all the spaces between sentences. that makes it easy ...

this was really good. i especially like the very last paragraph. i enjoyed the building of suspense that ended on a good note...or is it a good note? am i ...