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Robz

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Reflections of youth

    I actually entered this into a competition at my school, the first line was meant only for the judges. Was supposed to edit that out. Thanx

    May 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Reflections of youth

    Th "cold, hard glow" is referring more to his childhood(previous line) than to the actual ember. Sorry about that, is quite confusing. Thanx for the comments, really encouraging :)

    May 15, 2010


You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
— Metatron