Rob

Thank you for the kind words. Actawesome and I thank you.

Thank you very much for the reviews. This is my first short story in a while, so I am a little bit rusty.. I will rewrite it and hopefully something ...

Thanks a lot. It really helped. I don't really change a poem I've allready written. I usually take what I've learnt and use it in the next poem.

I can really relate to this poem. I guess it is due to my internet connection which is as fast as the speed of a burnt out light. I just ...