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Hey! Thanks for reviewing :3

Thanks Michelle =3= Mails isn't a word? MY COMPUTER LIED TO ME!! D;

Thanks for the review Skins! And that is the greatest review I've seen from a person: Iiscraftywriter lol

:D Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it 8D

I like it, a short prologue that can keep a reader wanting to read on. Now that's a prologue right there :] The character seems to be interesting. I can ...

I'm having trouble on seeing how you guys see this as "rushed" because I do not see how it's rush. D: It seems perfectly fine to me!! Maybe because I'm ...

Revised :]

Hey hey, there! Let me start out by asking something. Are you French? I only ask, because I am and I recognize some of the mistakes you made as being ...

But... your haven't come lately, typo. :) it's you, not your. or you're. lol, it was a good poem, though! Thanks! I always find weird typos that weren't suppose to ...

Hey sorry for the late review :) I was kinda busy buuuttt Im here now so let's get cracking!! :D Well first things first, Yes I like where this is ...

If you plan to continue, you should really stick to one tense. Aye, just like what everybody tells me ._. Still trying >.>

Hello there :) First of all, I would like to strongly suggest that before you post something, try really hard to go through it and check for spelling errors and ...

I hope i'm not too late, but the only thing I'd suggest doing wuld be setting a new paragraph with speech. Thats it Good work, and good like. I'm so ...

Thank you all for reviewing ^-^ I really appreciate it. Oh and to Reuben A, this is a fantasy novel so please don't make too much of the fuzz just ...

The Book Thief by Markus Zusak 8D