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Thanks!

Thanks for your review! I found it funny that often poetry is about explaining things by comparing them to other things in a variety of ways so I wanted to ...

Haha I actually wrote this poem after seeing the two poems on the front page but before reading them. I read your poem after and really liked it!

1 person, like if 5 people went 1 would do this, 1 would do that

The type of one i was going for when i said "one marvels" is one person in particular, like 1 person. I'm glad you like it, thanks :)

I'm not finished, but i'll post what I have later. it's later. ( I haven't had a chance to fix the errors from the reviews, so it's bad) A cold ...

Wow. That was deep. I liked the Clothes tag and human comparison, It fit in well. It flowed well and I hope whoever this braeden is, that he rests in ...

I think it needs the reality in the background. It gives you the feel that when they dance they enter a whole other world.

I like it. Is he dead or something? That's my guess because the MC is all sad even though he should be coming home soon. The details in it were ...