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Re: Circus
Hello wafflewolf7! Welcome to YWS! I'm a rookie here myself, just to let you know. Your story is dramatic and sad, yet so realistic. As the title suggests, your story ...
Sep 11, 2018 -
Re: Saving The Innocents || 2
Hello, Eros! I just read the second chapter of your novel and to tell you the truth it surprised me. I first thought it was a story about some man-child ...
Sep 10, 2018 -
Re: Saving The Innocents || 1
Hello, Eros! I'm going to point out some aspects I liked and disliked about your introduction. Well, first of all, the writing style was simple and easy, that anyone would ...
Sep 9, 2018
