Rivercool99

Hi, Very interesting, I am very undecided about his poem. I love the wording and it gives you a deep, dark, sad, feeling inside of me. But at the same ...

Hi, Very interesting, I really don't get the story at all whatsoever but you make up for it with the beauty of your poem. Did you start out the poem ...

Interesting and somewhat dark, but the ending was mellowed out and surprised me with the amount of feeling in it. (-: I think you should write other poems sorta like ...