RippleGylf

That would be why it doesn't fit. :P Without typos, that line is pretty good.

Very intersting. I think, overall, it is a bit verbose and overly descriptive. Try to simplify, and don't flood your reader with information. Simpler words would also benefit the piece. ...

I really enjoyed the "Secrets" poem and was curious to see what other poems you had written. All very nice. :)

I feel like I can really relate to this... thank you for writing it.

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem! I appreciate it. :)

There is a lot to enjoy in this poem. Your imagery in the first and third stanzas are especially vivid. I really like how you compared the mind to a ...