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Ripple here! I haven't read the first part, but my initial thought reading this was just, wow. A very unique piece. Huh, you came back. I guess we hadn't finished ...

Hello, Ripple again! Zoltar’s heart jumped into his throat for the second time that day. The figure’s eyes were like burning pools of red flame that gleamed in the darkness ...

Ripple again! Zoltar woke to the sound of snarls all around him. As he slowly opened his eyes, hideous, horned snouts focused into his vision. His heart nearly stopped upon ...

Hello, Ripple again! Really enjoying this so far. “You're on time, surprisingly,” Hisster noted coldly as Zoltar walked into the throne room the next morning. “Yes sir,” Zoltar mumbled sleepil

Hello, Ripple here! I am absolutely loving this fanfic so far. :D Gwen was sitting on a rickety wooden bench holding a small loaf of bread. It was freshly baked, ...

Hello again! Ripple here to review more of what looks to be a really cool work. :) Zoltar rushed back home towards the shadow lands, his wings creating great gusts ...

Hello! Ripple here. I saw that the majority of this was in the green room, so I figured I might as well start from the beginning. :P Zoltar's chest was ...

Very nicely written. I haven't read the first part, but I think I understand the plot alright. Since they’d left the manor and clambered back over the fence the way ...

Overall, quite an interesting piece. Your prose is very nice. Creating a path of my own, I venture farther away from the castle. At the age of seven, I’m old ...

Interesting concept. I haven't read the rest yet, but this seems pretty good. “Andy! This is the only way we’ll both survive!” She grabbed his hand again. They jumped off ...

Freddy and Lucy exchanged nervous glances. Their eyes (which weren't actually their own, but you have to overlook these details when describing clones inhabited by consciousnesses) rolled a little too

Now that I have gone back and read everything, I am absolutely loving this fanfiction. I really need to catch up on Merlin, but unfortunately that's difficult to do without ...

A very interesting poem. I don't have misophonia myself, but this poem helps me understand it a bit, I think. Because to me sound is red like a fire Burning ...

Nicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. :) "THIS IS AH STICK UP YAH'LL VARMINTS YA HEAR!?" The hooded figure suddenly shouted, Clanny whipped her head around towards the source ...

This is just such a great idea for a fanfiction. I myself am part of all three fandoms, and I think you accurately depict the characters, for the most part. ...