Rinos

Thanks for the feedback! Just a disclaimer. I wrote this as a shorter back half of the chapter I had already wrote. I understand if that was confusing, but that's ...

Thanks for the feedback! Just a disclaimer. I wrote this as a shorter back half of the chapter I had already wrote. I understand if that was confusing, but that's ...

Hey I'm so exited that you liked my first chapter! I have many plans for expanding this story and introducing two other supporting characters. I drew some inspiration from LOTR, ...

Thanks for the feedback MJ. I appreciate your comments and I will definitely work on the points you mentioned.

I would love to do some beta reading with you. Also what I meant when I said it sounded boring was that each character needs to have their own way ...