Ringo_rules987

This was actually inspired by the Tony Bennett version of the song, I didn't actually know Green Day had done a version of the tune. But anyway, thank you.

When I first read this, I was a bit confused, but once I read it over I understood the theme you were going for, which was pretty clever from my ...

Cade - an obscure Bright Eyes reference? You're my new best friend. Anyway, I see where you're coming from. I didn't want to it become monotonous with my word choices, ...

I do not hesitate to write something controversial. When I write, I want to make an impact. I wish I could write something that could change history, like Thomas Paine's ...

Well kris the intention of the poem was to make you think of how selfless you are and not make someone feel bad about how they way they act now. ...

To be honest I really didn't feel this was my strongest work anyway, I'll see what I can do to edit it, but I've gone over this poem time and ...

I don't explain my work, as a writer that is not my job. I write for the self interpretation of my audience.

The emotion was great, but the way you constructed it wasn't great. All the rhymes were just too forced. Just work on weaving stanzas together and you'll be great.

The emotion was great, but the way you constructed it wasn't great. Just work on weaving stanzas together and you'll be great.

I must be a noob because.. two reviews?