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Re: Love Me, Your Socio Chapter 1
I agree I think I introduced too much sociopathness into the beginning, it's just difficult because the sociopath is the one narrating and I think maybe I'm speaking more from ...
Thu Mar 06, 2014 9:19 pm -
Re: Forbidden Fruit
Stephanie Meyer is like my favorite author? Dear God how stupid was I in 2008? Was my brain completely detached from my body? XD ahhh I hate twilight so much, ...
Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:19 pm -
Re: Extension
I can't believe I wrote this in 2007. I feel like I was so immature and stupid back then and now I'm an adult and slightly smarter yay me and ...
Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:02 pm -
Re: Top Secret Cobra: Half-human
*moved to Fantasy Fiction*
Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:44 am -
Re: Top Secret Cobra: Half-human (Extract 2)
*moved to Fantasy Fiction*
Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:44 am -
Re: Breathing
Okay, "in and ex hail storms of doubt." since no one seemed to get it. It resembles two things inhaling and exhaling and hail storms. so they are inhale and ...
Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:00 am -
Re: Breathing
Basically the breathing represents a relationship. It has a lot of fixing up to do so that I can make point clearer.
Thu Jun 12, 2008 10:35 pm -
Re: Where You Will End Up, #1-3 /P
Part 2: Hola :) This one seemed a lot more human but it got....eerie. Still love the narrator. He/she :P seemed far more vulnerable and it was kinda shocking at ...
Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:28 am -
Re: Smile (I Am Leaving)
Rick=Awesome! :) I have your back too and so does "greg". Love ya! ~Rieda
Tue May 27, 2008 5:33 pm -
Re: Guilty Pleasures.
Hello, welcome to YWS! :) Just making sure that you know the rules. Try to keep your posts to two reviews to every one literary work you post. Thanks!
Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:31 pm -
Re: Everytime I look at You
Hello and welcome to YWS! :) Just here to inform you of the rules. Please keep your posts to two reviews to every literary work you post here. Thanks!
Fri Apr 04, 2008 6:21 pm -
Re: Racism
Haha, when I said by my dad I meant dad actually wrote this. After he thought of it, he was really excited for me to put it up and see ...
Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:26 pm -
Re: Taneantra(#1):Hayefalie's Curse (book 2)
haha, it's in the process of publication but as always that takes such a long time it's unbearable :P. I'll see if I'm allowed to post the first one...I'd love ...
Wed Feb 27, 2008 6:17 pm -
Re: Red Wine #2
I'm explaining actual events of her life. The first extremely violent act that Elizabeth Bathory actually saw was her father and a doctor putting a grown man in the stomach ...
Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:24 am -
Re: Forbidden Fruit
Stephanie Meyer is like my favorite author! I didn't realize that the story I was trying to portray was like that of Twilight until now...or more so like eclipse I ...
Sat Jan 05, 2008 11:20 pm
