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Re: How?
Who do you turn to when the only person who can stop you from crying is the one who is making you cry? **Really cliche here. Try to say a ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: Life
Hello! :) Welcome to YWS. Firstly, a rule we have, of keeping your review to post ratio 2:1 which is two reviews to every post of your own work you ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: The Wind Spell
Hola! :) Now the review. North, East, South, and West The wind shall come with it's best Blowing, gusting, shaking the trees Making people weak at their knees. **"The wind ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Paranoia, Ch.1 /P
This was awesome! At first when I looked at it I was thinking about how long it was but ended so soon. :( I need more! You've got many...elements in ...
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: A letter to a belove'ed reader
Hola! :) Firstly, the title didn't really drag me in. I think it was mostly because it was addressed to the actual reader and I was like "...why am I ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: On Paper
Hello, welcome to YWS! :) Firstly, a brief rule that we have here, is to have 2 reviews for every post you make of your own work. Now for the ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Where You Will End Up, #1-3 /P
Hi! :) My poetry received responses, usually rejections, with notes dashed across the page, or atop a line: "searing but unfocused," "radiant if schizophrenic," "apocalyptic without an apocalypse." Th
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x09 "Revelations" /P
Finally I get around to this! Okay, so. I want more. I'll start off by saying that....why wait?! 0.0 ...next. Alex is crazy! I love him. And now...Summer, gah she's ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: A Wacky Riddle Poem
Hello! Welcome to YWS! :) Just here to inform you of the rules here. Remember to check out the rules and guides at the top of the screen labled about ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x08 "Friction Force" /P
James and Luke are so awesome! Their lines and their behavior towards each other is just fun all the time. Besides that, Lena is adorable. I think I love her. ...
Apr 20, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x07 "Of Mice and Men" /P
This is late! But I swear I read this post a while ago! I'm here now though, hehe. Okay. So, the beginning conversation with James and Luke was classic. I ...
Apr 20, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x06 "Homesick" /P
Lena's parents are so awesome! I loved how she slapped the kiity. I kept imagining that scene over and over. Besides them, I don't know what to say. There were ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x05 "Between a Rock and a Hard Place
Luke is my hero. When he was with Simone I was like...oh come on, he's just going to go through that and do nothing. No he's Luke, he's going to ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x04 "Swollen Grapes" /P
The orange juice totally reminded me of my family. That was funny, I like how close all of the characters are. Okay...now, for James and Luke. *sigh* They're so adorable ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Foreign Markets: 1x03 "Clubfoot" /P
Gah, your characters are just so awesome! I can't wait to see this actually played out I'm so watching every episode! My favorite part was when James and Luke were ...
Mar 30, 2008
