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Re: A Short Story Entitled: A Beggar's Tale
DOH hit submit twice :P
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: A Short Story Entitled: A Beggar's Tale
[quote="JigSaw"][pre]The stream of humanity passed him by. Uncaring. Unknowing. He didn't mind though, after all how could he when he was mad? And so he sat, in his tattered clothes, ...
Nov 22, 2005 -
Re: Knives, Blood, and YWS Poetry
Laughing is fun :)
Nov 15, 2005 -
Re: Creative Prologue (For Fun?) (R for graphic violence)
It is possible for any creature to have any weapon. The only caveat to this is that the grip needs to be changed to fit the hands (or in this ...
Nov 15, 2005 -
Re: Due North
HA! My personal opinions are always fact! See? ;) RIPOSTE: Not in this situation :)
Nov 12, 2005 -
Re: Due North
Okay... well, then take this! Learn how to write paragraphs. It sounds too choppy. :P RETORT. I believe that is a matter of personal opinion. :)
Nov 12, 2005 -
Re: Due North
I lived decently for a long time using that philosophy, trying to find whatever it was that needed to be found... When I suddenly found it. In the form of ...
Nov 11, 2005 -
Re: Due North
Although this is quite good, it doesn't read like fiction. You started a new line after every statement, so you end up reading this more like poetry. Also, this confuses ...
Nov 11, 2005 -
Re: Due North
7/10. It could be better. Can't really find any grammatical errors, which is the only thing i'd be able to help you with so... someone else help this guy! lol. ...
Nov 10, 2005 -
Re: Tell All
*raises eyebrow*
May 12, 2005 -
Re: Summertime Ain't No Reality
"dident even notice you where being timed" Good ending, superb poem. Slightly too long.
May 12, 2005