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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blood Child- Prologue

    Very interesting! Your writing style and voice fit the story nicely. I just have one question, why would the guards be patrolling the slums if they were going to be ...

    Dec 22, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Drink of Thyself-chp 1

    Wow. Very interesting read. Is Ana an abbreviated form of Anaya? Claraification on that would help, if so. Also, did you mean to switch into first person here: "I giggled. ...

    Dec 22, 2007


The thing about plummeting downhill at fifty miles an hour on a snack platter - if you realize it's a bad idea when you're halfway down, it's too late.
— Rick Riordan, The Son of Neptune