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Well thank you. I think everyone has been any of them at one point or another. This is the short fiction I'm considering most to submit to the magazine. This ...

Is it just me? I don't see anything. Just 'based on a true story'... I wanna read it. Pweeeeaaaasssseeee?

And sorry my review was uber long.

I just noticed most of the grammatical errors, but as it is midnight I will fix them later. Thanks everyone. :]

Well thank you.

:) Thanks! This piece is more popular than I thought it would be.

D'awww. :) Thank you so much! I'm glad I portrayed it well. It hits home with me. Thank you for taking time to read it and leave your thoughts.

Thank you so much! As I was typing it for the umpteenth time I did notice that even I was a bit irked by the repetition. But Thank you for ...

Well thank you. You did mention some things I did not catch. As for understanding, that's because Interlude One comes after Chapter One, and you didn't seem to have read ...

Well Confictura, you certainly have a way with words. :) Thank you, -Renn and flattery does not become you after a while. Just, say something mean already!

Again, thank you! :)

Thank you so much Sassykat! I appreciate the corrections, and once I get the time (homework is wretched) I'll edit it as you see fit. :) Fondly, -Renn

D'awww! thanks! I'll correct it and thank you oh so much for pointing that out. Thanks for your time in reading this, I'll edit it. Fondly, -Renn

Thank you all SO much! It means a lot to me.

Thank you all :) I do agree with commment-er above ^ I'm not much off an 'action-type' romance person xP If I ever do write something like "romance" it leans ...