Renard

I have never read anything before where the perspective comes from a pork rind, but this is really inventive. Well done! I love the way you alter the spacing and ...

This is really unique. I love the way all the lines rhyme. I am guessing that the audience of this piece would be quit young, and if I'm right, you've ...

I love the way you entwined the thoughts/conversation into the poem. Really cool! I love the fact that this is poem has a narrative as well. I can only suggest, ...

Wow. This is really well written. You've captured the thoughts and feelings of the character beautifully, probably due to your experience of them yourself. :) The only criticism I could ...

Great use of language. This works really well as a narrative poem, without giving too much specific detail it leaves the outcome open to the reader's imagination. The link between ...