Rekuen

Ok, I might miss a couple mistakes but I'm trying to be as thorough as possible. I had a dream one night and woke up inspired to put as much ...

My name is Delihla Bee. I try to pretend my family is at least semi-normal and some of the time it works! But other times... well it's a living- hell, ...

I really like it. However, I was a little jarred by the sudden change of pace halfway through and a few things that didn't really make sense. I realize that ...

I like how you describe the scene, but found it a little jarring how there is a new paragraph almost every line. Most of those can be combined, and if ...

I like your writing style, but I think a much longer story full of similar entries would get boring rather fast. You need some sort of a "hook" to keep ...