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Great structure, too. It was very fragmented, which suited the topic perfectly.

I like pudding.

Sorry. Didn't amuse me. But school creative writing assignments, I find, are often not as good as what you would normally write. I'm curious about what sort of school assignment ...

"Rake the lawn." I don't get it, and I'm not sure I'm supposed to. But it amused me, and I always love a bit of randomness.

Interesting. I'm sure half of it went over my head. But it certainly has great ideas and good images.

I know. But the fact that she was sixteen is one of the reasons it was so real. Besides, it was much easier to get published in the 60's than ...

I was thinking of sending this to some publishers to see if I can get it published as a picture book. What do you think? Am I out of my ...

Cute. Are you sure you're thirty-five and not fifteen?

That's because it's not a story. It's an interior monologue. What do you want from ten minutes with the topic of going out at night?

What a sweet moment! Made me get all misty-eyed at the end. Though I do find myself feeling very curious about what happened with the narrator and the guy they ...

I hope you translate these yourself, or else we have a plagiarism issue. But anyway, I listen to a lot of J-Pop, and this song seems pretty standard.

Well written, but it seemed a bit too fragmented and vague for my taste.

You know, maybe the time when you wrote this aided it rather than hindered it. You had the right atmosphere for insomnia at the time, and you wrote about it ...

The Lost Years of Merlin. There are only five in it, but there are other related books by TA Barron.

We've got a third vote for the odd structure, but I've seen odder. Besides, it was a good read.