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Reedo121

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: .

    This has a nice rhythm to it. Keep it up!!!

    May 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A page for ghost notes

    Question!!! Is this a Poem or a story. Just wondering.

    May 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Til' Summer Comes Around

    This is way to short to be a novel. This is a short story. Just giving you a heads up the next time you want to create another story. Other ...

    May 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Meaningless War

    Hey, Wes, you finally finished this amazing story. Not much to nit-pick about. Keep it up! :D

    May 26, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Previous Mistakes

    I must admit, great song. If you put a good beat with it, it sounds like an actual band could play this. Keep it up!! :D

    May 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Bloodlust

    I really like this short story. You should really make a sequel to this. Keep writing, please!!

    May 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Sniper

    Like Jalmoc said, I have read this story in my Enlish Book. Me and Jalmoc are in the same class and we had to read this story the first week ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Halo Reach: Lone Spartan

    Well, you and me love to write these Halo stories don't we. I can see why.

    May 24, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Sacrifice

    Well, Wes this is really good. But like I said, if only there was more action. Maybe like a fight scene between the man with the gun and the man ...

    May 24, 2011


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites