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Re: Red Leather
This is really good writing. I like the poem's originality and so is the subject natter. I am confused though are you talking in the perspective of the leather on ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Trail Mix Chapter 1: Almonds
I think this is an I interesting story. Your writing and humor is good and you fleshed your characters out well with Amy as a bratty "smartass" and a Mark ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: murder in the write
This is fantastic! The emotions are powerful and clear and I feel the anger. Your writing style I found original and interesting without those lame cliches. I noticed there is ...
Sep 7, 2014
