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Thank you so much! I appreciate you guys for lending me your opinion. The character was thirteen in the journal entries, and she's dramatic. Maybe I should build the younger ...

Why, thank you, HorseLover! I think you're awesome as well ;) My Bright Red Scream 3 still hasn't gotten any reviews :( ! If someone has time I'd love to ...

Wow! Thank you for all the reviews! I completely agree with you, Oh, Silent One, "Great big scary world" does sound all of five years old. I'll be working on ...

Hey everyone! I'm just a wee bit sad that I haven't received any reviews on this one yet, especially since I've been giving about three a day to other people. ...

Thank you for the review! I was wondering though, I posted part three of this series two days ago and it hasn't been reviewed at all, yet. Could somebody please ...

Hi Jennafina! If I was afraid of negative feedback I shouldn't post my stories to be reviewed. You're not mean, you're honest about how you feel, and I appreciate that. ...

Hmmm, I didn't really pick a rhyme scheme, I just wrote it as it flowed, and now looking over it I'm not sure I want to edit that. If I'm ...

Thank you! I truly love your suggestions, and have edited my draft. If you would like, I posted a short story about this same character a few days ago, and ...

Hmmm, I was trying to portray that she didn't feel as if she deserved nice things. Abandonment leaves young ones with a lower sense of self worth. I'll try to ...

Oh, I do see what you mean! Both about the 'erupting' and the 'weeping dog'. I made some adjustments to the language as well. I completely agree with you about ...

Hmmm, I tried originally to add breaks to make stanzas. I'm new here, so, it might just be something I don't know, but it seems no matter how many lines ...

"The Stand" By Stephen King. It's an amazing, and extremely long, book. The government accidentally releases a super flu that kills 99% of our population. The survivors are just, somehow, ...

I made some of the changes suggested and corrected a lot of punctuation. I already see more areas that need some adjusting, though. What does everyone think? I feel like ...

I appreciate your suggestions and will be taking them into consideration! This society is so inspiring. I'm already brewing up new ideas and improvements. Thanks so much!

Wow! thank you for all of your input. I appreciate your criticism. " 'The man' You've already introduced the father. 'He' would work fine." In your opinion, might it be ...