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Re: Begin Again
I liked this. It was a bit confusing in the beginning, but I enjoyed the rest of it.
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Little Blue Veins
This was really good! I think you should keep writing.
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Falling Into Darkness [Chapter 1 - Survive]
Hi BlueRaspberry, Thanks for the critique. :) The MC's dad travels a lot for his work, and the 20 year old was a girl that the MC's dad met while ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Ordinary
I like this. I think the writing style suits you. You should write more stories like this.
Apr 8, 2010