RedMoon

Thanks for the review. As for the rest, I'm working on it. This is sort of a short story created for Bram as a character. I wanted to explore his ...

Thanks for the review. Jemma wasn't really bossy, but that's because I changed almost everything in their dialogue bit. I'll be sure to fix those things. And thanks for the ...

Thanks. I will try and fix those things. A little more about Jemma is told at the beginning of the next chapter, and she is important, but only as a ...

It was Mom who was calling the grandmother by her first name. It was kind of meant to show the...trouble between them. I think trouble is the right way. The ...

An hour outside of Billings in the mountains. I didn't say, though, so you're okay. And it just seems far away for Raya and the kids. It's kind of a ...

Okay, thanks so much for the review!

I just had to say that the Bible also talks about capital punishment (death penalty) and God was for it. It was a deterrent in a way to those who ...

OOO!!! YAY! Hit me up when you post it and I'll try to review it as quickly as I can. :D

Thanks! I hope it goes over well, too. And I'll consider changing it up some. It was originally in four lines for each stanza, but it would make this post ...

Thanks!

sorry, typo, ignore this.

Ok so

I love Doctor Who! I love this too! Oh, that rhymed. Cool. :D This is awesome, by the way. Like I said I love Doctor Who, and I like it ...

You should....

Okay, I will. :D